Hi, friends! We're just starting our long school break, which means Nate has finished Grade 2 and Pete has finished Kindergarten!!! Our last story entry for this school year (but we'll keep posting other things...) is a story written about a picture of a boy on a bicycle looking up watching a woman ride an antique car through the sky. Here they are:
Magic School Car by Pete
One day I had a dream that I saw a car in the air. It had no wings. I was dirt biking and it went up by magic. It was a magic car. The magic car could fly. The lady inside it is my Mom. It is my car. The car flies when we put in our magic key. My Mom is going shopping to Tesco Lotus in the car so she can go faster. Our family likes my dream of our magic car. The end.
The Magic Car Key by Nate
This is a play that is mixed from long time ago and nowadays. There was an old-fashioned car who nobody thought was useful until a sixteen year old girl thought she would give it a try and see if she could fix it at a shop, but she had a key that would make cars fly. This was her first time in a flying car. She went over a neighborhood and saw a man biking on the street. She shouted at the man. The man looked up. He was very surprised and he couldn’t believe his eyes. He had never seen a flying car before. He was so busy looking up and biking that he crashed, and the girl laughed. “Bye, bye,” the girl said, and the man was very angry at her. The end.
Thursday, March 18, 2010
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